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I do not own Hetalia or you

This is the first thing I have written here on Deviantart, so if there's anything I can improve on, please do tell me. Constructive criticism is welcomed. I hope you enjoy

Word count:493 [Yes, it’s small]

    Y/n coyly walked down the maroon carpeted hallway with her head down, her fingers lightly skimming the brown walls, but avoiding the doors. A light grey sundress gently laid on her shoulders, lightly hugging her waist and flowing down to meet her knees. F/c sandals fitted onto her feet. A matching f/c bracelet with a small sun charm held onto one of her wrist, jingling occasionally. “You are my sunshine” It read.

    ‘I can do this’ She thought to herself. ‘It’s not that big of a deal. It’s just a boy. Simple as that.’

    Oh wait, no it’s not. No he’s not. He is a tall, unrealistically handsome man that just so happened to move into the same apartment as Y/n. The same floor as her, even. He had green eyes that shone like the moon in the night sky, sticking out.

    While she approached the general location of his apartment, her pace slowed down slightly. Y/n inched towards to his door.  

    ‘I can totally do this.’ she thought. ‘I know i can. Besides, it’s too late to back down now.’

With both, unseen and newfound confidence, she brought her fist up to the wooden surface of his door and knocked.

    After hearing minimal shuffling coming from inside, the door opened to show a tanned man with a bright grin and gleeful green eyes that shined with enthusiasm.

“Hola, chica, what can I do for you?”

    Y/n’s face turned into an unhealthy shade of bright red for a person, her confidence wavering as she surveyed him. He was wearing a white button up shirt, the sleeves were rolled up about a quarter of the way. His broad, muscular chest stood out against the pale material, as the shirt itself was buttoned just about half way. A pair of nicely fit jeans adorned his legs, They too were slightly rolled up.

    The h/c haired girl clasped her s/c hands together in front of her and jerked her head to the side, looking anywhere but at him. She let out a nervous laugh.

    “Heh, h-hey there, uhm… I was, uh, kinda wondering if…” She looked back at him, regrettably. His head was tilted slightly to the right, giving him a ‘confused puppy’ kinda look. His green eyes staring into her’s. ‘He is just too cute for his own good.’ she thought.

     “Are you alright, señorita? You look red.”

    If even possible, her face turned more so, and she struggled to come up with the right words. Every last bit of confidence left her.

She let out a small, pathetic whimper like sound before scampering away, leaving Antonio confused. Again. For the third time.
Swirly Tree
I painted this in the span of about four days because I'm extremely lazy. 
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I do not own Hetalia or you

This is the first thing I have written here on Deviantart, so if there's anything I can improve on, please do tell me. Constructive criticism is welcomed. I hope you enjoy

Word count:493 [Yes, it’s small]

    Y/n coyly walked down the maroon carpeted hallway with her head down, her fingers lightly skimming the brown walls, but avoiding the doors. A light grey sundress gently laid on her shoulders, lightly hugging her waist and flowing down to meet her knees. F/c sandals fitted onto her feet. A matching f/c bracelet with a small sun charm held onto one of her wrist, jingling occasionally. “You are my sunshine” It read.

    ‘I can do this’ She thought to herself. ‘It’s not that big of a deal. It’s just a boy. Simple as that.’

    Oh wait, no it’s not. No he’s not. He is a tall, unrealistically handsome man that just so happened to move into the same apartment as Y/n. The same floor as her, even. He had green eyes that shone like the moon in the night sky, sticking out.

    While she approached the general location of his apartment, her pace slowed down slightly. Y/n inched towards to his door.  

    ‘I can totally do this.’ she thought. ‘I know i can. Besides, it’s too late to back down now.’

With both, unseen and newfound confidence, she brought her fist up to the wooden surface of his door and knocked.

    After hearing minimal shuffling coming from inside, the door opened to show a tanned man with a bright grin and gleeful green eyes that shined with enthusiasm.

“Hola, chica, what can I do for you?”

    Y/n’s face turned into an unhealthy shade of bright red for a person, her confidence wavering as she surveyed him. He was wearing a white button up shirt, the sleeves were rolled up about a quarter of the way. His broad, muscular chest stood out against the pale material, as the shirt itself was buttoned just about half way. A pair of nicely fit jeans adorned his legs, They too were slightly rolled up.

    The h/c haired girl clasped her s/c hands together in front of her and jerked her head to the side, looking anywhere but at him. She let out a nervous laugh.

    “Heh, h-hey there, uhm… I was, uh, kinda wondering if…” She looked back at him, regrettably. His head was tilted slightly to the right, giving him a ‘confused puppy’ kinda look. His green eyes staring into her’s. ‘He is just too cute for his own good.’ she thought.

     “Are you alright, señorita? You look red.”

    If even possible, her face turned more so, and she struggled to come up with the right words. Every last bit of confidence left her.

She let out a small, pathetic whimper like sound before scampering away, leaving Antonio confused. Again. For the third time.

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Moonwolflove Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the watch :)
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LadyofLegends Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2016  Student Writer
thanks for the faves. :) can you tell me why you liked them?
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Kibbles518 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2016  Student Filmographer
Thank you for the watch!! ^w^
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The-Lovely-Mouse Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome! you definitely deserve it, keep up the good work.
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ImmyWimmy1 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for the favourite! ^u^ <3
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The-Lovely-Mouse Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :3
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MadameInserts Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much for the watch!! :heart:

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The-Lovely-Mouse Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^-^
Besides, you deserved it. Your writing is very good!
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MadameInserts Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Ogosh, thank you! You're so sweet! :heart:
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LadyofLegends Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2016  Student Writer
thanks for the fave. :) (Smile) Can you tell me why you liked it?
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